3．结语已为你写好．

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给已经结束教学工作回到美国的外教Lisa写一封邮件，询问她的近况及征询她的建议并表达祝福．

写作时人称以当先人称和第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．

写作要点：1．询问她的近况； 2．回顾你在Lisa课上的收获；3．就你目前英语学习中的问题征求她的建议；4．表达对她的感谢和祝福．重要短语：on behalf of sb（代表某人…），send one's best wishes to sb （向某人致以最良好的祝），returned to sp（返回某处），enjoying sth（享受某事…），can't help doing sth （忍不住，经不住做某事）阿卡索，teach sb sth（教某人某事），lead us to do （导致某人做某事），appreciate sb/sth（欣赏…），continue doing sth （继续做某事），have fun in doing sth （做某事玩得开心），look forward to sth/doing sth （期望做某事）．

【高分句型】

1．It's been a while since you finished your teaching this term and returned to America．

此处是"since"句型，"It is/has been+一段时间+since+过去时的句子"，意为"自从…已多长时间了"．

2．What you led us to do is not only earning English，but also learning to appreciated us．

此句是主语从句，谓语动词为"is"，主语为"What you led us to do"，"what"在主语中作动词"do"宾语，表语中有"not only…，but also…这个短语．"

解答 Dear Lisa，

How is everything going？I am writing on behalf of my class to send our best wishes to you．（询问她的近况）

It's been a while since you finished your teaching this term and returned to America．【高分句型】Are you enjoying your life with your family？We know you must be，yet we still can't help thinking about you，for you've taught us a lot in your classes．What you led us to do is not only earning English，but also learning to appreciated us．【高分句型】（回顾在Lisa课上的收获）Could you give me some suggestions on my English study？（就你目前英语学习中的问题征求她的建议）

We are thankful for you and the year we spent together．And we hope that you can continue having fun in the teaching career and be healthy forever．We are looking forward to your reply!（表达对她的感谢和祝福）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用优级词汇和优级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．